Rough Edit Feedback

I have received feedback on my video from the rest of my class mates.

Positives

1. Nice Variety of Shots
2. Clever Editing
3. Lip Syncing is Good

Negatives

1. Needs to follow beat of the music more
2. Some shots were maybe too long

Over all I am very happy with the feedback that I have received as it will help me to improve my video. For my next draft I know what I need to change in order to improve my video and am thankful for the constructive criticism my class has offered.